I was wondering...

If anybody could check my poems out because it would really mean alot to me becasue im new to this site, and I am really trying to get some feedback on my work. I am aspiring to become a really good writer, and this is just the start. Plus im like, addicted to this site... haha ok ok i'll shut up and end my little speech i got into...
so if you could please check out my poems and give me some feed back i return all commments and i really would appreciate it!! thanks a bunch,
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cate

I would love to read some of ur poems! I don't have long so I will try and read more later on!

i'll get right on it!

ok

omigosh thank you soo much you dont know how much this means to me! i will return all the comments and thanks for the feedback

i will surely do you think you can comment on a few of mine out of these..

A new start
No longer
I am an Artist
Your Ring
A Rose
and an act of growing up

thanks

sure, of course i will! i bet there wonderful!

but can you pls check out "unapproved love" ..of mine thanx o and can you rate it to? lol thanx

xoxKrystin

I will be sure to return all comments and thank you so much!!
one more favor if you could check out my poem called "broken record of memories" that would be great!
thanks soooo much!