new poem

please can as many ppl as possible comment on my newest poem? it means a hell of a lot to me ..its called "so much pain" ive never written so much emotion in one poem
plsssss comment on it? ill be so greatful to all of you who do
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thanku donald means so much to me

anyone else pls comment on "so much pain" its my best poem i think pls?
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You do have Talent...I enjoyed your poem
Xox Sherrie

thanku everyone 4 ur comments, means SO much to me
if i can do u guys ne favours pls let me know

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