hey will anyone read and comment my poems?? i'll read yours

i really need to get better and to do that i need help so if you read any of mine and comment i'll do the same for you please help me get better

sure I'll do it. I got some spare time.

hello david and the person hu started this (cant remember ur name im sorry!!!!)

pls can u both comment on "so much pain" thanku soooo much ill do the same 4 both of u
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