Looky please?

Hi ok. I'm really new at this poem writting thing. I thought that I would give it a try because it seems to work for a lot of my friends, and a lot of people on here.

I would really like if people could comment on my stuff and tell me what I can do to make them better and what not.

I'll comment back and all that stuff, but I'm new to this and would really like to get better at it, and I know that there are some GREAT poets on this site, and would like some help with mine.

I never let anyone read my stuff. You all are the first. Lol...it makes it easier though, because I don't know you guys. LOL. But yeah...please check some of my work out. It would mean a lot.

Thank you so very much!

ill take a look at ur stuff :) pls comment on "so much pain! thanku xxxxxx

Would you read Set Free for me Thanx! I will check out your poems now!

Georgi-Already did! Lol...it was great!

Brooke-Sure thing!! And thanks for the comments!

Those were really good. Great job! And like I said...we have a lot in common. Lol...keep it up!

iight i will take a look even though i aint that good but plz take a look at mine too i need advice too :)

Thanks fo much for all the comments. It means a lot!!

Brooke thank you for the advice. I'll think about it the next time I write!!

If anyone could please read some of my poems, I would really like it. I'll comment and all that on yours, but again, I'm new at this, and would like some input!

Thanks guys!

Done! And thanks for the comments!

Check your mail too. Lol.