Comment on my poems

I would really appreciate if you comment on any of my poems, and to tell me if i should arrange my way of writing or not! My poems really mean something to me, and it's quite a lot for me to share them with you guys :) So rate and comment your honest opinions about any!

Rob x

I will read some of your poems. Would you check out a couple of my newest ones! Thanx!

i will :) to both of u :)

Hey Robert...if you could please check out a couple of mine, I would be more then happy to read some of yours! Thank you!