born2die4pride09 needs poems to feed upon (poem for a poem)

  • Dorotea©
    20 years ago

    hmm, could u take a look at Land of My Past?
    thank you.
    I really want honest critique so u don't have to sugarcoat your comment or anything!
    I've already read your poem, i really liked it!
    Satuxxa

  • Jason Meres
    20 years ago

    Read any or all of mine you'd care to. All criticisms welcome.