Storm Maiden

  • Dorotea©
    20 years ago

    hmm, I would need some feedback on this poem from someone who really knows how to write poetry. I don't want any sugarcoated comments like "oh it's suuuuuch a gooooooood poem" just tell me truth, and maybe give me some advice on how to improve it.

  • Jason Meres
    20 years ago

    The truth you shall have.

  • Dorotea©
    20 years ago

    Oh thank you...