*NEW POEM NEED COMMENTS*

Please rate and comment on my newest poem "Breakup"? I really need advice on that one... i will reate and comment on one of yours in return

ANYONE!?!?! I REALLY NEED FEEDBACK!! PLEASE!!!

its a very nice poem but rhyming it when your telling him will be weird any of mine you want or if you dont want to read mine read any of my friends Jason Meres he is a great writer

Thanx everyone!
ANYONE ELSE!?!?!?