Please comment my poems... It would meen a lot.

  • The Angel of Secrets
    20 years ago

    I have a bunch of poems but I don't have a lot of comments. Please help me out...
    Please comment on: I loved and I lost, The skies woul get black, A better tomorrow, and A brand new day.
    Thank you:)
    I appriciate it:)
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