Please read and comment on my new poem

ill do the same for you, thanks.
"This is not the end (i love you grandpa)"

i will surely read it.. i will read some more if you wan too..

you can pick some out of these to read if you want..

for you
no longer
a new start
i am an artist
a rose
an act of growing up
your ring
and hidden

thanks! and i am gonna read your poems right now!!

love..
shannon