*****A new poem. Very strange. Dark.******

Hello everyone.
I am going to do a blatent bit of advertising here.
It is called "A dim skyline set on black curtains" and i would really appreciate any comments you may have. It is the first i have written of it's type and i am really intruiged to see what people think and their reactions to the poem.
It is submitted under dark poems, other.
You can find it through my profile.
Thank you.

-ellie, the author

great poem Ellie =D

merci. lol. really thankyou so much. i really quite proud of it and wanted it to get a bit of exposure you no?. anyways thanks, i read your butterflies and it is quite good, try using mre imagery to really show the feeling. i dont mean it is a bad poem at all because it DEFINETLY isnt just a suggestion, the butterfly is just a nice image to go with love.

-ellie

Great poem. I read it twice actually. I'm actually going to read more, you write well. Check out my new one "right where i belong" if you want. Thanks.

thanku. appreciate that. appreciate the comments as well thanku. i will go check that out now.

-ellie

*Just read*

Wow. Your writing is so original and i find it truly captivating.

-ellie

okie dokie im on me way...