Could anyone rate/comment on my poem "My Shiny Friend"?? (read i

My best friend is a cutter and I wrote that poem in her viewpoint. I'd really appreciate any votes/comments. Hardly anyone has looked at it and I'd really appreciate the feedback. I try to look at the poems of anyone who's rated my stuff...so keep that in mind!! Lol...thank you soooo much!

I will read it! If you could check out any of my newer ones! Thanx

Sure, will do right now.