Another peom - you read and vote I'll do the same

Can you read my poem "Chastised". If you do I'll vote and comment on 2 of yours.

heyyy hun! i will surely comment on "Chastised" for you and thanks so much for the comment and support..it means alot. and you dont have to read any of my poems..:) but if you get bored you can.. i think you have comment on every one already though pretty much..
but some tittles of mine..if you want are..
your ring
no longer
I am an artist
a new start
a rose
an act of growing up and uhh. i think thats it

but if you dont have time then it is fine with me..you dont have to you've done enough:)

Take care,
Much love,
Shannon

i will 2.. can u comment on a cuple of mine