I Feel These Are My Best... Plz Comment

  • Hayley Marie
    20 years ago

    I Have Some Poems.. Well quite a few. lol which i think are my best... plz tell me what u think.

    'The New Girlfriend'
    'Ive Already Lost 2 By Depression'
    'The Day My Nana Came'
    'Please Love Me Daddy'
    'Letter To My Best Friend'
    'I Died Today'
    'This Cancer Is Starting To Hurt'

    You dont have to comment on them all, but just tell me what you think PLEASE!!!

    thx xxxxx

    ***anybody want comments on theirs? im here***

  • AJ
    20 years ago

    ok, I'll head there now. Could you check out "The Grip Reaper" and maybe some others. Thanks

  • Brookeღ
    20 years ago

    I will read could you check out Set Free and any other of my newer ones! Thanx! No More I will read yours too!

  • Hayley Marie
    20 years ago

    Thanks You Guys For Commenting On My Poems!!

    i have done another one.. "I Did It!! I Beat It" plz could people comment!! its a true story!!

    if you ask, then i'll comment and vote on urs!!

    Love Always
    Hayley-Ree xxxx

  • Courtney Lynn
    20 years ago

    hey will you comment mine back?
    hush
    why?
    why did you do this to me?

    thanks
    courtney lynn

  • Hayley Marie
    20 years ago

    yeah sure! i'll do it now!!! xxx

  • Georgi
    20 years ago

    sure thing! pls comment on my two latest xxxx

  • Brookeღ
    20 years ago

    I just read your newest one! Would you please read my newest one too it's called Only A Dream! Thanx!