Would some one help me??

  • VampyraKi†
    20 years ago

    my poems suck i want honest help on how to get better everytime i ask anyone noone tells me anything that i can understand so please if you say something say it as if your talking to a four-year-old thanks

  • Caleb
    20 years ago

    Try using more descriptive imagery.

  • Dorotea©
    20 years ago

    Well, I looked at your poems (but I didn't read any of them), and it seems like they're all pretty depressing and sad. Write about something beautiful, like the ocean or the mountains. And maybe put some more emotion into them.
    Satuxxa