Eh I need help

In school we are going over poetry, and i write poems, but i might not consider is poetry.. and this friday we have to write a poem and read it in front of the class and i wrote one, but i want to know if its ok? or if i will embarass myself if i read it!!

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=359628

plz dont be easy, i need to know if its good enough to read.. thanks

Well, I think it's a very sweet poem. I don't know why you'd have all the noises and such at the beginning of each second sentence but it's a very nice poem. I enjoyed reading it and I don't think that you will embarrass yourself reading it to the class. I love how you rhymed but it wasn't the normal obvious rhyme.