New poem - Betrayal - double deal

I wrote a poem called betrayal but had to make a new account. This is still my main account it's just that i dont want any family or friends to come across it because they dont know about it. Have a great day everyone and i'll return the favour twice off this account. Just leave your two poems names here. I would really appreciate any comments because it was so hard for me to write. :) I'll put a message up here from my other account.

Anyone?