A thousand tears for dad :'(

Please read my new poem "A Thousand Tears For Dad" The poem is about my dad, he died when I was 12 years old. I really need some feedback it would mean so much.. I just want to know what you think. So please vote/comment and I will vote and comment on as many poems you want.

thanks a lot, hugs from the lost and lonely

sure il read it right away could you read my newest one/s?

Sure I will do that right now =D

You're welcome.. =D