Feedback?

I really need some feedback on my poems.. So please help me.. I really need to know what you think about them.. Please read any of these poems:

A Thousand Tears For Dad
My Dad: Dead And Gone Forever
Eternal Sunshine Of The Spotless Mind
The Final Cut For Marc
Butterflies
Damn I Hate You
My Dream Boy Dosen't Exist

Please comment/vote.. I will return the favour.. I promise.. hugs from me =D