I'm Back (if you even noticed I was gone)

Hi all~

I've been off the site for awhile. And I recently added a new poem. It's called Cake Anyone? and I haven't gotten any feedback. I think it needs work, but I'm not sure where to begin... Any help is appreciated. I will do my best to return the favor.
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

Welcome back! I will read it now! Could you read Clouded Memories! Thanx I appreciate it!

Thanks you two!! And I read the poems you mentioned, commented and rated. Continue writing!!

Nada-
on my poem 'bleeding soul' what do you suggest I do to make it better? I re-read it and fixed a line's wording.. but not really sure what you mean.

*~*Soldier Lover*~*