my first poem.....

hey could you please comment/rate on my first poem

HAPPY..

and i'll be glad to return the favor!!
just let me know what poem you want me to check out!!!

thanks

^^$%$#!@# Wendy *~%$!*!

Very good. I really liked it. Feel free to check out some of mine. I think you might understand where I come from on a few of them. I just finished one called A Mother's Plee

--Sher

Sure I would love to read it for you. Would you read The Demon, Clouded Memories and Special Prayer! Thanx I would really appreciate it! You don't have to read all 3 if you don't want to! Thanx