critic

I have seen comments posted all over and mostly all of them say something like there good, if you choose, read the ones wiritten by this hand, be a critic with a movive of trying to improve me. i don't know if there will be a response. but please tell me of the one's you want me to read, and comment shall I with a good motive
P.S.
You may write that one I wrote was no good, it's o.k if you do, these words seems hard, but I shall imbrace them to improve

Would you please tell me how bad my poems are truly are I want help. I will read your poem and give my honest opinion.

P.S. if you were trying to spell Embrace its with an E not I sorry I have very bad spelling so I am trying to improve myself seeing if others misspell

I would like some critique, someone to be honest, could you read,

A funny little creature
The stars
and Bullied please

thanks x

Pick any of mine if you dare. I know that they all need work

--Sher

I know my spelling is abit off and punctuation is off too but here it goes please comment and vote on
I Never Knew
The Never-Ending Gift
Knock, Knock

I know my spelling is abit off and punctuation is off too but here it goes please comment and vote on
I Never Knew
The Never-Ending Gift
Knock, Knock

Done! Would you read The Demon and Clouded Memories for me please! Thanx!

:~) Could you review "My Blood on His Fist" for me? I will check out some of yours 2. Thanx.