read...please...well u don't have to

just curious....do i suck at writing..be honest:::

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=374184

No one can tell you if you suck....silly. Some people will like it and some will not. Poems affect people in different ways, so as I may hate it someone else may LOVE it. But I didn't read it.

That didn't suck..it wasn't the best peice of poetry I've ever read..but certainly not the worst..there is always room for improvement ;)

Good, but needs a little work.

The rhyming sounded forced, it reminded me to much of something like -

"You make me cry,
Now i really wanna die".

Deffinatley room for improvements, but as long as you like it, that's all that matters.