a little request

hey everyone. my name's gina, of course lol! i was hoping that a few people would be awesome enough (which i know everyone is lol) to read a few of my poems and give me feedback -what's good and what i need to improve. annnd.. if it's not too much to ask for, i'm kinda in need of writing topics. i've been having some trouble developing and elaborating on any certain... oh what's the word.. topic or so. it would be awesome if a few people gave me some ideas of what to write about. thanks everyone and anyone who checked this topic thing out. i appreciate it.

any ideas that i cant really write about: death, suicide, and stuff like that.. (no offense anyone.) i dont have anything against it, and i respect it, i just personally dont have much to say on it. i do, however, do better on sadder poems.. i can write happy poems if i have the right inspiration (but that usually only comes from certain people lol). anyways.. this is prbly boring yall, so i'll just.. yeah. lol thanks again!

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I have just looked at a few of your poems and commented on them. I hope that my opinions will be of some use to you.

As for topics to write poems on, the list is endless. If you are really stuck trying opting for a general subject such as nature.

Nici

Thank you Nici! your comments are great and i appreciate your time.

I would love to say a special, special THANK YOU to all of those who’s given me feedback on my writing. I honestly appreciate all those who take the time to review my work! Please continue to read and comment! thank you all sooo much!

ok well heres the deal I will give you three poems that I wish you to read over and comment and vote it would mean alot and I will read on yours. I have been writing for long time and I got alot of subject that I have worked with. I think the best thing I could say is I draw most of my inspiration from the world thats around me. Just look at everything and tell how you would see the world in your world. Like a painter painting a picture of the world with his or her words thats the best advice I can give. Here are the poems please comment and vote on these.

Time
Poacher Or Provider
unbreakable Secret

i have a few new poems up.. so if someone could take some time, i'd really appreciate it if someone could read and comment on a few. thanks again! and i can read and comment a few of yours too. just post the ones you want me to read! or i could just pick and do it randomly. again, thanks yall!