Will comment yours, for mine...

I'll comment your poetry if you could help and critique mine, i don't want anything like 'wow thats good' but just need to know how to improve my writing, or whats good about it in paritcular so i know how to use that in future.

I'll comment on yours, and try to add a bit of usefulness to what i say, but i am new to this game.

Main two i'd like you to look at are:

Poisoned ground
Just like you and i.

Ok, ill check out your poems.. But do not get mad if i say your poetry is awsome, cause if i say it I mean it;)

Have just read and commented on those two poems for you. I hope my comments will be of some help to you.

Nici

Thank you, to both of you - to anybody else, more comments on these two pieces would be useful, i'm trying to use imagery and a mix of two themes, a nature combined by actual emotion...and need to know if it works really, some confusion i guess can be found within it.

I will comment honestly on yours if you would please comment honestly on "Childhood Memories" and anything else that catches your attention. Thanks!

Sure thing