Rose Coloured World (feedback anyone?)

I would appriecate any feedback/comments/votes on one of my latest poems, which is titled 'Rose Coloured World'.

This poem is one of my few attempts at trying to write a non-rhyming free verse poem. So basically I just want to know whether people think it works well or not.

Of course I will repay the favour by commenting/voting on any of your poems, as I am always on the look out to read new work.

Cheers,
Nici

You've got a deal...

Read any of mine..=)

okay yeah I liked it!!! I commented so try to rread mine thanx. and yeah the poem is cool your read the whole report on your comments next to your poem.

Thanks for your comments guys, I have read a few of your poems and commented on them. If there is any other particular piece that you would like me to read then let me know.

Nici