just looking for some critique

if anyone around would like to read some of my poetry ive submitted, i finally noticed you can edit this stuff. Im going to go back and clean some of the rough spots up, and if i could get some actual critique, it would be absolutely lovely. I would do the same for anyone who would like the favor returned, but im no scholar, so i dont know how much help that would be. It would mean alot to me though if anyone could do this. thank you all!