Critique.

Post 1-3 poems on which you want honest critique, and I will get to you as soon as I can.

(It would be nice if you would check out some of my newer poems, but you don't have to)

I'd like you to critique one poem in particular:

'Natural love, contrast'

I'll try to get a look at one of yours aswell, though my critiques are particulary hopeless being new to poetry and all.

hi! please read fairy tale reality check and any others! thanks!

A deadly betrayal
the first to cry
and anyother one you want the first two are more important though and be and hard on them as you can
i will do my best to read some of yours

Okay, I read all of the ones posted above and a few more. The offer is now over, 'cause I'm getting headache from giving so much critique. =-P