Deal time

Can anyone be so kind, and grant me the honour of reading and commenting on one or more of their poems, and then perhaps provide me with a much needed comment on my newest poem, Shooting Seagulls off the Sky, and, if acceptable, a few others too?

Thank you...

Just name the poems you want me to read...

peace and crap

I will read your poem.

I've read your poem but I will comment on it later cuz there's a problem right now and I can't comment on any poems.