Great Poem to discuss by E.E. Cummings

  • LAST RONIN
    18 years ago

    I would like to know what everyone thinks of this poem, I saw this poem when I was about 16, I think every year I look at it something changes.

    1(a

    le
    af
    fa
    ll

    s)
    one
    l

    iness

    By E E Cummings

  • ღ*KiM*ღ
    18 years ago

    Hmm...interesting.

    I kinda deciphered it as:

    A leaf falls as one, loneliness.

  • EoB
    18 years ago

    me too

  • LAST RONIN
    18 years ago

    you have to look at the poem much closer then that. the poem is very deep.

  • !*!Zoe!*!
    18 years ago

    Edited. Incorrect information.

  • LAST RONIN
    18 years ago

    sorry Zoe But I have to Disagree with you on that one.... http://www.gvsu.edu/english/cummings/caps.htm

  • !*!Zoe!*!
    18 years ago

    I'm sorry...I have sent you an email as well.

  • LAST RONIN
    18 years ago

    something I found on the net

    Although one may think of l(a as a poem of sadness and
    loneliness, Cummings probably did not intend that. This poem is about
    individuality - oneness (Kid 200-1). The theme of oneness can be
    derived from the numerous instances and forms of the number '1'
    throughout the poem. First, 'l(a' contains both the number 1 and the
    singular indefinite article, 'a'; the second line contains the French
    singular definite article, 'le'; 'll' on the fifth line represents two
    ones; 'one' on the 7th line spells the number out; the 8th line, 'l',
    isolates the number; and 'iness', the last line, can mean "the state
    of being I" - that is, individuality - or "oneness", deriving the
    "one" from the lowercase roman numeral 'i' (200). Cummings could have
    simplified this poem drastically ("a leaf falls:/loneliness"), and
    still conveyed the same verbal message, but he has altered the normal
    syntax in order that each line should show a 'one' and highlight the
    theme of oneness. In fact, the whole poem is shaped like a '1' (200).
    The shape of the poem can also be seen as the path of a falling leaf;
    the poem drifts down, flipping and altering pairs of letters like a
    falling leaf gliding, back and forth, down to the ground. The
    beginning 'l(a' changes to 'le', and 'af' flips to 'fa'. 'll'
    indicates a quick drop of the leaf, which has slowed by a longer line,
    'one'. Finally, the leaf falls into the pile of fallen leaves on the
    ground, represented by 'iness'. Cummings has written this poem so
    perfectly that every part of it conveys the message of oneness and
    individuality (200).