The Enslavement of Beauty

  • EoB
    20 years ago

    ...is in fact the title of my new poem.

    I'll read and comment honestly on one of yours if you check it out, and comment on it:)

    Thanks:)

  • Brookeღ
    20 years ago

    Sure I will read it now!
    Would you read At Peace I would say Hunting but I know you're not a fan of dark poems! Thanx!

  • EoB
    20 years ago

    I'll check'em out:)

  • Brookeღ
    20 years ago

    You didn't have to change that but hey it does sound better! The dark poem I have studied and read a lot about serial killers that was the meaning of the poem. Yes At peace was true it was very hard to write. Funny you mentioned that particular line I changed it once already. I have to leave that poem alone it's to hard for me! Thanx for reading!

  • EoB
    20 years ago

    no prob:)

  • Piper
    20 years ago

    i would but caps lock and shifting gives me a headache

  • Emily
    20 years ago

    I'll get on it right now...

  • EoB
    20 years ago

    heehee Crystal=)