***please read and tell me what u think....

This is a poem i wrote...tell me what u think...please exscuse any spelling errors...

Take my hand and walk with me,
Show me what u want to see,
Walk with me until we have nowhere else to go...

Then you lead and let me follow...

Show me you love me-kiss my lips,
Place ur hands gently upon my hips,
Pull me closer-don't let go...

Then you lead and let me follow...

Look me in the eyes-show me a smile,
As we sit and talk for a while,
Then when time is gone and we have to go...

Then you lead and let me follow...

Hey the poem was really good.. i agree you should post it.. i also would rate 5/5.. very well written.. bye bye EJ