Critique for any poems

Hey, just wanted to put out the invitation. Im looking to get my stuff published in a local puclication in august, and am trying to figure out what my chances are, and what stuff i should submit. I am a very honest critique, and wether thats what you want or not, go take a look at my profile, read a few poems, leave some criticism, and i will definitely do the same. If you could aslo vote, im almost at thirty poems, and i want to fairly get that 4.3 rating, all those badges look so cool. Or something.
But, if you want critique, i will do just as many poems as you do for me, if not more. I really enjoy reading these things.