a poem and its sequel

Could you guys please read First Kiss and A Forgiving Friend. They go together although kind of vaguely. I'll comment on any that you leave. Please leave some cause I don't like chosing them out. Thanks. kilman = David B.

I'm sorry guys. I guess I'm not good enough for you all. *tear* screw this poem anyways. No more for now. (not like I had any anyways. *tear*)