Very Short

  • Piper
    20 years ago

    I have 3 very short poems and i really would like it if you would rate and comment on them so i can edit them they are really short

    i'll return the favor
    titles=Love{acrostic}Pain and Heartbreak{cinqain}
    thaanx alot

  • Carmen
    20 years ago

    ok. read 'em. i think you should work a bit on them, and i told how in the comment. any 3 of mine would be great.