Constructive criticism..

Hey,
Got nuthin 2 do with my time but am strugglin on which poems to read.. some of them just dont hold my interest. If ne1's got any strange, twisted, meaningful or just plain beautiful poems I'll be happy 2 read them and C/R.. I wont say "check out mine" coz there fairly crap and its a waste of precious time so take my advice and dont bother!!! Lol, just a friendly warning. Neway, anyone with something different, Id love to hear from you, Cheers,
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Sure
Confessions
Hunting
or anything of my featured poems of your choice! Thanx I appreciate it!

Hey, well done brooke!! Your a really talented writer with a lot of emotion in your creations. I found your work especially interesting as it does not all revolve around you wich, often, is the case and leaves people sounding desperate at times. Keep it up, you could really go somewhere with that talent!
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If you could check out my newest one "state of mind" that would be great. Its nothing fancy but I want to know what ppl think about it.

Sorted, gd poem btw, I enjoyed it and I cant stand Love poems so your honored - lol.
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Gd work, i enjoyed this one, it was an interesting read witha strong sense of confusion. Ne more like this I would be very willing to R/C. cheers for pointing me in the right direction,
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Ta Brooke for the kind words on my poem. If any1 thinks they can offer me CONSTRUCTIVE advice on my work i would really appreciate that. I must warn you though I am a work in progress so do not expect too much. Thankyou,
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