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Ok you all have been asked a million times, but I have some new poems (relatively new) and need some advice, only to improve, and the newest ones are all about Jake. I would Like to fix then before he sees them!

there is also a poem written partly in French, if anyone is interested.

If you comment on mine, I return the deed, sometimes reading more then what you read of mine. I almost always leave comments, and vote. so check my stuff out, tell me what you think!

~Breeze

I commented on a few of yours, you're really good! =)

I was wondering if you could give me your opinion on my poem "When The Music Goes..." ( http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=434219 ) Personally I think it's one of my better poems...you're opinion would mena lots to me =). Thanks. xoxox

-Mortalidaga.
xxTakeCarexx

Ok I just wrote another one, so there is one more to look at! please do...this one might be one of my best yet!