coulr someone rate my poem vodka and duckies?

it's not just the short lil qoute thing that alot of people have done this is an extended version of it it's not very long and any imput would be great!
i'll return the favor
thx

Natalie

IIIIII did! i loved it. 5/5 4 you, and i commented too. Would you mind if i show this poem to my fiance'?? I won't take crediit for it. We just finished let go of the 6 baby ducks we rescued, and i know he'l laugh his ass off

go ahead lol i'm glad it made u laughed

thx for r/c
I rated a few of yours

thanx. so, what inispired that exactly? or was it simiply random?

Thx 4 the r/c