Looking for Honest Critiques

I am looking for honest critiques on my poem "So it Goes." I will reciprocate with as honest a critque as I can give on a poem of your own. You can leave me with a personal preference of yours to read, or I can just pick one. Any honest input is appreciated.

did that.. :)
keep it up

ok here goes my honest critique

Kei I'll cheak ur poems out. Wanna read and comment on mine? thx