Looking For Peeps' Opnions and Critiques

Hey everyone! I'm new here and I'm also new at writing poems. I would really appreciate it if anyone could take a bit of their time to read some of my poems and give me their opinions. Any and all opinions are welcome. To those who comment and rate my poems I thank you in advance. I shall return the favor and comment on your poems.

Thanx again everyone

here I go.

Thanks for all of the suggestions you gave me and for taking the time to read some of my poems. Greatly appreciated! I'm sure my writings will get better with time with more tips such as yours.

Thanx again to all who comment!