SOMEONE please READ my POEMS, they ARE good ONES

hey i would appreciate it if you could read some of my poems and comment on them. i need to see what i could improve on. or you could e-mail me at punkiebruster84@hotmail.com, or pixiemixie89@rock.com. so please e-mail me or comment on them. thanx

mi 2! u ahev talent gurl!! keep up da gr8 work!
luv tanie xoxo

ya, they're good! maybe some don't always rhyme but poetry doesn't have to. my only comment- try adjusting other words and maybe (just maybe) don't use that same words in a poem unless its meant to be that way. hope u the best and take care:)