Honest opinions please :)

Hey beautiful people of this forum, would you guys be a doll for me a take a look at some of my poetry :) *bats eyelids and smiles sweetly* go on make a girls day. teehee well I would really appreciate it and don't be shy to tell me what you really think when you comment. I won't react childishly to comments telling me you didnt like it but just be honest really. I do like positive comments though :P but I'd just like to hear people's honest opinions on what they think. thank yooouuu and i shall be glad to return the favour :D
suzy
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please please pleeeaase teehee xxx

You have some really nice poems :)
I enjoyed reading them. I hope
my opinions didn't seem too mean.
I just tried giving you helpful tips ;)

thanks for the comments! Don't worry they weren't mean at all and they're really helpful :) It's what i really need, some helpful honest opinions about them. I never really thought about the structure of the poems but now you've poitned that out I'll work on that, thank yoou soo much you're tips were really helpul and im glad you enjoyed reading them. I'll get down to reading your poems and commenting as soon as I can!
thanks :)
xxx