Please... I'm new.. Pity me

Please check out my poems, I'm sure they're not even comparable to the works of art that you create but I will be honoured if you are willing to gaze upon my words.

I read some of ur poems their good, could u please ead "untitled" and please be honest

will do, feel free to comment on my poems, a little constructive criticism never hurts.

Could you guys please focus on "fool’s paradise" if nothing else.

hey ill check it out and maybe a few others right now, if possible plz chck out any of mine:)

Sure I will read a few! Would you please check out a few of my featured poems in return! I would appreciate it! Thanx!

ill read and comment on some of urs huni,
pls coment on my newest three. clara, libby and catherine xxxxxxx

Thank you to everyone who commented

I'll be honest, this is simply in hopes that I don't drop off the edge of the planet unnoticed.

hey.. no way.. if u keep writin this gud stuff lyk u did "fool's paradise", u definitely wont "drop off the edge of the planet unnoticed".. u go, girl!!.. am sorry i din get to read the rest of ur poems, but i promise il get to em wen i get the time...
plz check out soome of mine if u gonna head my way.. and if u do, plz include "silent tears"..
keep up the gr8 work
nouna

thank you ~bRoKeN-hEaRtED~, I will have a look at your poems