Serious Writers:

I want to read / vote / review the work of people who are willing to do the same but seriously. I don't want "hey nice poem." Don't waste your time nor mine. If you want serious reviews and are willing to give them then post here.

o.k could u look at "untitled" thanx

Roses: That was sweet but there is ALWAYS room for improvement.

Otto: When criticizing ones work whether constructive or otherwise you should provide reasoning for your comments and/or suggestions.

Pls can u read Catherine Libby and Clara and tell me how i could improve them? i will comment seriously on some of urs nat xxxx

Ok...anyone else?

hey nat i replied to ur question on the comment under yours on catherines poem xxxxxxxxx

Oh ok... ;)

i love your poems your a really really good writer. for some reason i cannot comment on love or friendship poems so that's why i did not comment on those one. the ones i read were really good and i loved them could you read some of mine please thank you

could you on these
Inner Beauty
Because of You

I will seriously return the favor

OK I'm done with all of you......ANYONE ELSE?

I'd love if you would seriously comment on about 3 of my newest poems. I will do the same for you. Thanks so much ♥

OK.................... I enjoyed!!

ANYONE ELSE?!

I'll do some. :D How about three each?

Ok, I took a look at two of yours, I enjoyed them both, I would really appreciate honest comments on the black town and one of my latest poems please when you get the chance, thank you very much I appreciate it..

hey can u read some of mine. i wanna see where im going wrong. than u xxx

I'm lagging behind today guys...I worked a double. Sorry...but I promise to get to all of you (if not today tomorrow!) Pinky swear!! Witches honor!!! ;) Thanks so much....I enjoyed everyone's comments......

Ok, so i read and commented on three of your poems. I am sorry if I seem mean in my comments. I was just being honest, and saying the fist thing that came to mind. Also I am annoyed by poems that follow the same rhyme scheme and stanza set up all the time. Yours seem to not be able to get away from this. You should try to write some poems that are more you, and less "typical form". However, the content of your poetry is awesome. You have wonderful ideas, and a great talent for chosing your words.

~Breeze

I'll say it here since you probably won't go back and read what I left....writing is a hobby to me and I am running through each and every piece you read. Each poem is completely me. I don't think of form or style before writing I just start writing and see where I end up. The 4 line stanzas do seem to be my favorite I guess but that's me....not everyone is the same. I'm not trying to be famous...I just love to write.

hey, sorry to go on, but please could you take a look at two of my poems, I hope you got my comments, thanks very much..

xxx

hey can u comment on my 2 poems?

need people to vote on newest poem

"skin deep"

it's NOT about cutting, so please don't anyone lecture me!

♥Niki

Ok, do any 2 poems of mine you want and i'll do 2 of yours! peac out