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I will make a suggestion before even reading your poems... alot of people wouldn't even take the time to read your poems because of the way you write. If you don't take your writing seriously why should anyone else? Have some pride in what you do. Write properly.... ;)

I agree with Natalie.

I'm not against you...and it's not that I didn't like your poems. I never read your poems (that I can remember) but by reading this post alone I didn't choose to go read your poems. It was because of the way you wrote this thread. I figured your poems were written the same way and why would I want to read your poems if they were written like this post? I was just saying take your writing seriously and others will too.

will go now and read...

I think the problem is NOT your poems.
But the way your write.
The way you type reflects on your personality.
That's how I see it.
When you write with "r" and not "are"
and "poemz" not "poems" "u" and not "you"
it makes you seem like a lazy writer. and no one wants to have to think about what your saying.
If I'm correct...than yeah?
If I'm not correct..I'm making myself seem like a total looser.