Please

I wrote a short story and posted it on here...I wanted comments and didn't think it would matter. I've gotten a few and a few ratings as well, but I'd like to have more and even suggestions. You don't have to rate it if you don't like it or want to...One girl said she completely disagreed but liked it anyways. Its the one titled You Don't Know Me...please and thank you. and I will post back...and to the ones I've said that to or asked me to, and find this, I will, but I haven't had much time to actually seriously comment...I like to be honest and such. :) Have a nice day.