♥ Desperate For Some Feedback ♥

I have just written a song, and one poem that I need feedback on. I'd really like to know what you guys think about them. One is for my friend, the song is the first one I have evr written. It'd really mean alot to me if you would vote and comment on them.

I will return the favor. Plus, if you read/comment/vote on both of my poems, I will read/comment/vote on four of yours.

Thanks so much!

Erikka ♥

okay i'll start now.

take care
Sara

Thanks, Ill take a look at you work too ♥

heyy i read ur one song and omfg it AWESOME!!!! ur hav talent! keep it up! XXXXX
JL

Thanks so much!