can u see where im going wrong?

hi, ive written quite a few poems, but havent gotten anywhere. i dont spose u can read some of my poems to see where im going wrong. thank u xxx

YOu have a lot of peoms that are the same thing, again and again, just like all the other poems that people write. You rhyme in all the ones I read, the same rhyme that is used in most poems.

Your poems are wonderful, full of great ideas, and your individualism. However you style dose not precive that uniquness your words try to show. try using diffrent formats. Diffrent styles can change the entire point of the poem. read into it a little to see waht I am talking about.

sorry if I didnt help, I tried.
~Breeze xoxo

no u did thanks. it means a lot. it better giving me advice rather than just saying how ood it is and not really meaning it. thanks again. xxx