PLEASE!!!!

hey everyone,
if you've got the time, i would REALLY appriciate if you could read my new poem called "Used (Dear Maggie...)
I really could use some feedback on it... need to figure out whether to actually give it to...maggie... (hence dear maggie) lol
i'd be happy to return the favour!!
please help!
Love u all,
xoxoxo

i've read your poem, i think its full of emotion, it flowed really well. the way you wrote it was amazing. keep up the good work. have a look at one of mine and let me know what you think. keep writing, you have a real talent xxx