wanted reader please...

will someone please leave me a comment/critique on my new poem "My Sweet Taboo"....I finished it tonight and would love to know how I did on it.

thank you.

What an awesome poem...wow...left me with tears....anyways yea..lol...i read your poem (obviously) very good....plz check some of mine out...thanks!!! luv yas mwah

-kayla-

Sure! Would you please read Downward Spiral for me Thanx!